New short film - feedback wanted

[ryandavies]

I've just finished a new short film called Klowntown and would like some feedback. We made the film in a month on no budget (it would have been finished faster but I'm a student in the middle of leaving college and going to university). Any feedback is appreciated! You can see the film here:

[golightly]

I remember the Pythons doing something similar with grannies and that was way back in the 70s and it's been copied many times, old hat really and clowns give me the creeps. Sorry, but it didn't do anything for me, hope you don't get discouraged though you've done something I've never done.

[faginsgirl]

I`ve definately seen worse posted on here lol. I think to make it work you need lots more Klowns for the invasion. The actors are good.

[Heinrich]

It seems to be some sort of morality play but it was neither funny nor enlightening. I think it fails.